Guy walking in from work comes through to meal, he is drunk, gets mad, hits her, falls to floor.
0:11 - there is a bit of a pause in the music after the build up, thought that we could have the girl wake up in her bed alone with the bruise on her face. audience could be like oh shit, she got hit and he left her. then to realise at the end she got hit and kicked him out. she gets up and goes to bathroom, checks on bruise and puts make up on to cover it up.
0:45 - flashes back to memories with him, her trying her best with him, makes her angry, but stays calm to not anger him as well. ideas: girl crying and is upset, man notices but does not do anything, grabs drink, goes and to watch tv. doing dishes, she is done, he brings plate through.
goes out with friends and neglects
general neglect
makes tea or beverage of some sort, he leaves note/text that he's gone out, she throws phone, smashes.
she goes to get drink of vodka but she is out and so goes out to buy alcohol to ease the pain.
on her travels, she sees the dude with another girl, they are close. she gets pissed off/sad and goes home.
she goes home and waits for him to get back then confronts him. he gets through the door, confrontation begins. she ends up getting hit. he walks out. she gets up, grabs empty vodka bottle, and chases him outside, confrontation outside, she throws bottle at him and smashes on the wall. she then goes inside gate and locks it on him. he gets mad and tries to break in, can't get in. she goes in shuts the door.
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